My novel was recently critiqued by a 20-yr veteran editor. This is what she had to say.

A DISTANT RUMBLE: A CRITIQUE

 

 

The Current Title – How catchy is it? How well does it convey the information in the manuscript?

“A Distant Rumble” is a fascinating title that is sure to arouse the curiosity of potential readers. A subtitle such as “Mysteries in Time” might further draw readers to delve into the adventure.

 

The Current Synopsis – How catchy is it? Does it intrigue?

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